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PostSubject: Friendship Bracelet   April 25th 2011, 12:42 am

This is my friendship bracelet poem I wrote. Please don't copy as I have been through that experience.

Friendship Bracelet
Beautiful spring colors of blue, pink and red,
Go really well together with the fine silky thread,
The beads were woven in and out, in and out,
It was a lovely, fantastic bracelet no doubt,
We always wore it to school everyday,
It made us really want to play,
I’ll never forget my precious friendship bracelet,
Or where I misplaced it.

Hope you liked it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Friendship Bracelet   April 26th 2011, 10:49 am

Wow awesome! (don't worry, I don't copy, I've been through that -____-) I hope you write more! This is one of my poems I wrote last year:

In my generation I lived once in harmony
Sweating on this farm
Trying to aid the animals
Harvesting crops
Dark Clouds rose over the horizon
THUMP! As I fell to my knees
This peace was disturbed
My leader sat in his chair
Commanding, Conveying, Charging, Craving
Sending innocent lives to the tops
Under blameless apprehension
To them, I am a stain on their robes
Thousands upon thousands
SLASH! There goes another head...
I was his servant, dressed in all lies
He said he loved me, malignantly telling me
Every time I heard those 3 magical words...
A wizard cast a spell on my mind
Not a gift but a curse
I did everything he said
Even if he agonized me
Stayed for weeks sitting on the cold stone floors of the dungeons
Barely any food sent
Bound up in chains, grasping on life, gripping on love, understanding the end
Staring aimlessly at the ceiling
I could think of him and only him
Timer ticking audio penetrating in my ears
Heart beating like drums pounding repeatedly every half second
He told me I would be his queen later on but when I saw this world again...
Everything was gone, Everyone was gone, I moved on
Dead trees, dead people, dead animals
He ruled a village, a town, a country, an earth
With nothing except this castle and me
Shattered on the floor was my chains
So I ran far, far away
Wilting like a flower in the cold rain
Even if I could not survive without his love
I still know I could survive without him


When there's a Japanese Ronald McDonald... you'll know what to do. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Friendship Bracelet   April 26th 2011, 6:26 pm

wow awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: Friendship Bracelet   May 22nd 2011, 3:06 pm

I have wrote so many. Mainly me venting so all of them suck! xD

I know this one sucks! xD

Walk Away: When I realize I have no where to turn, I still turn to you. Even if that is no option of mine, I still turn that way every time<3

But when I talk to you its like being in an empty room. And you are standing at the glass door; I see your lips moving, but I don't know what you are truly saying. I can only guess.

If only I could reach into your heart, and find out if I am somewhere in there or if I am just stuck in your mind.

We are young, but life is moving fast. I just want to keep you forever, but the clock is still ticking as you walk slowly away. You think I don't realize how fast time is going, but I see you slowly walking away. And I wish you could either just run out of my life, or forever stay<3

And here I am, sitting in the empty room looking through my own heart trying to find if this is real, or all in my head.

Just walk away... Please.

Yes I know its bad D:

Am I the only one with nothing good to say? xDD I guess so What a Face
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